55 word fiction

A collection of 55 word stories written by various bloggers.

Gvenum

Derailed Train of Thoughts

Standing in the train he visualizes every man's "often delusional" dream.

grin Babe! (on first sighting)
*Hmm?* (is he looking at me?)

Niiice! (continued appreciation of a thing of beauty)
*blush* (he IS looking at me!)

! (she hasn't smacked me with a baseball bat yet!)
*smile*

Hmmm! (Aha! The elusive smile! she is mine!)

Rest is history.

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